Monday, 14 November 2016

Meeting the mentor

 Mr Adams is kits mentor after kit moved she hasn't had her nan to go to when something goes wrong.  so she's been going acros the street to mr Adams who is a willing nice and understanding old man, they have tea together and talk things out and then when everything's cooled down at home and kits done having her tea and biscuits she heads home. Mr Adams is a significant reason kit knows how to deal with her problems. He always know how to cheer her up.

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  1. Very good, just a few spelling errors you may want to check.

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  2. Very impressed with your work Mitch, keep writing! Don't give up on your dreams no matter how many people tell you that you have spelling errors.

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